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Steamy windows

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Breathe~
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Finger touches
like whispered words
stir desire...
Smoldering
as ember kisses
trace along neck contours
pulse beating erotic rhythms
against parted lips...
Musky scent
intoxicating
shrouding mingled hair
clinging to glistening flesh...
Straining bodies damp
beneath rumpled sheets...
shadows dancing freely
captured in candle flickers
upon the wall...
Lovers sighs echo
embracing in crescendo
releasing through steamy windows
lost upon a jealous night...


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Breathe~
This is lovely.
You do free-verse quite well.
Hope you keep it up.
~*Marge*~



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Very beautiful!
Breathe~
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Marge..

Is that what it is called?  I'm just learning about the different styles of poetry...I'm a bit scared to venture out of what is comfortable though...

and thank you for your kind words... )

Denise...Thank you...just a fantasy of mine...*grin*
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this is great....love the whole thing, and love the "jealous night"...what an image!
 
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