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Steamy windows |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Finger touches like whispered words stir desire... Smoldering as ember kisses trace along neck contours pulse beating erotic rhythms against parted lips... Musky scent intoxicating shrouding mingled hair clinging to glistening flesh... Straining bodies damp beneath rumpled sheets... shadows dancing freely captured in candle flickers upon the wall... Lovers sighs echo embracing in crescendo releasing through steamy windows lost upon a jealous night... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Breathe~ This is lovely. You do free-verse quite well. Hope you keep it up. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful!  |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Marge.. Is that what it is called? I'm just learning about the different styles of poetry...I'm a bit scared to venture out of what is comfortable though... and thank you for your kind words...  )Denise...Thank you...just a fantasy of mine...*grin* |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is great....love the whole thing, and love the "jealous night"...what an image! |
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