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jascanvey
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England

0 posted 2000-02-06 09:56 AM


It was a year ago that I met
The two who share my life,
There must have been a hole in my net
To give me so much strife.

One is always teasing
And brings me so much joy,
The other very pleasing
And seemingly so coy.

I couldn't choose between you
So the relationships begun,
There was nothing else to do
So I started to have fun.

You both know how to raise a smile
Through my good days and my bad,
For you two I would walk for miles
Knowing I would never be sad.

The thought of losing one of you
Was all too close last year,
The reality of ever being apart
Is now my biggest fear.

You shared my sadness and my pain
When I lost my mother, my friend,
Didn't think I could ever smile again
Thought my life was at an end.

But you two kept me oh so near
And filled my days with living,
That's why I hold you oh so dear
And will be forever giving.

These two rascals, my life is theirs
They are so fine and dandy,
(The only thing is I can't stand the hairs)
My two little dogs, Holly and Candy!!

And what were you thinking?
~Julie~


[This message has been edited by jascanvey (edited 02-06-2000).]

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 2000-02-06 10:06 AM


LOL...I was actually beginning to get a bit angry that you were toying with two peoples feelings...LOL, you got me with this one  
jascanvey
Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
2 posted 2000-02-06 10:17 AM


LOL thanks Hoot Owl, I wrote it last night as a bit of fun, thought it would be a giggle to post it!!
catwomen
Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49

3 posted 2000-02-06 12:17 PM


you had me there.
Cute poem.

 

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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4 posted 2000-02-06 04:34 PM


You seem to like to end with surprises! This is cute!

Denise

jascanvey
Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
5 posted 2000-02-06 04:38 PM


Catwoman - glad you liked it  

Denise - do I? I hadn't realised! This was just a bit of fun, something lighthearted for a change. Glad you took time to pop in again.  

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