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Why Should I Choose?

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jascanvey
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since 12-26-1999
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0 posted 02-06-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jascanvey

It was a year ago that I met
The two who share my life,
There must have been a hole in my net
To give me so much strife.

One is always teasing
And brings me so much joy,
The other very pleasing
And seemingly so coy.

I couldn't choose between you
So the relationships begun,
There was nothing else to do
So I started to have fun.

You both know how to raise a smile
Through my good days and my bad,
For you two I would walk for miles
Knowing I would never be sad.

The thought of losing one of you
Was all too close last year,
The reality of ever being apart
Is now my biggest fear.

You shared my sadness and my pain
When I lost my mother, my friend,
Didn't think I could ever smile again
Thought my life was at an end.

But you two kept me oh so near
And filled my days with living,
That's why I hold you oh so dear
And will be forever giving.

These two rascals, my life is theirs
They are so fine and dandy,
(The only thing is I can't stand the hairs)
My two little dogs, Holly and Candy!!

And what were you thinking?
~Julie~


[This message has been edited by jascanvey (edited 02-06-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Julie - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 02-06-2000 10:06 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

LOL...I was actually beginning to get a bit angry that you were toying with two peoples feelings...LOL, you got me with this one  
jascanvey
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2 posted 02-06-2000 10:17 AM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

LOL thanks Hoot Owl, I wrote it last night as a bit of fun, thought it would be a giggle to post it!!
catwomen
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3 posted 02-06-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

you had me there.
Cute poem.

 
Denise
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4 posted 02-06-2000 04:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You seem to like to end with surprises! This is cute!

Denise
jascanvey
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5 posted 02-06-2000 04:38 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Catwoman - glad you liked it  

Denise - do I? I hadn't realised! This was just a bit of fun, something lighthearted for a change. Glad you took time to pop in again.  
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