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Patrick B
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0 posted 2000-02-06 08:00 AM


In my dark and blackened husk
where light is lost to fastened dusk
I ponder my sad and lonely fate
I have this navel to contemplate
a secret stirs so hidden and deep
a door ajar from semi sleep
the light floods in my head it spins
the curtains drawn the show begins
I boast a new and vibrant coat
I catch a breeze and onward float
I shiver through a misty cloud
and delight at gifts of flight endowed
tumbledown to a splash of flowers
then succumb to nectars powers
while I sip from the honeyed cusp
I gather a sheen of pollen dust
a petal here,a petal there
love carried on lifting giving air
as night settles neath my virgin moon
I still my wings as flowers swoon
I dream of flowers and lush green fields
a promised tomorrow and what it yields




 hello darkness my old friend


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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-02-06 10:52 AM


Beautiful imagery! Took me a minute to figure out what this was about but when I did, it made me smile. Cute!  

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2 posted 2000-02-06 11:34 AM


Great imagery  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-02-06 04:27 PM


Very beautiful, Patrick!  

Denise

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4 posted 2000-02-06 06:13 PM


Patrick-
Took me just a fraction longer
to figure this out,
but Bee that as it may,
wonderful images
you did portray.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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