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Between You and Me!

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 02-06-2000 05:30 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Between You and Me!

I stand here by the sea
Facing the horizon that
I know, leads me to thee
How cruel the world, that
Our lands are separate
How cruel to deny us
That Physical touch
Shared by lovers as such.
But the sea in between
Carries the dreams
You and I have seen
Sends in the waves of
Passion, and desire which
Runs through our bloodstream
I call out,  I love you!
And pray that the sea
Carries this back to thee
Where you stand
On the other side
Facing the horizon
Which leads you to me.


Dark Angel


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Alias
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1 posted 02-06-2000 05:34 AM       View Profile for Alias   Email Alias   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alias

That is one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read... you touched my heart Dark Angel. Thanks.
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 02-06-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This is a wonderful and beautiful poem, Dark Angel, and I hope he reads it. I have been on the other side of the sea, and you describe the feeling so well.
Excellent work, such a romantic poem
I love it
Liz
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 02-06-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Absolutely wonderful DA...this is one that I do so hope you share with her. It is so strong in its longing and so packed full of feelings. Beautiful work my dear friend  
catwomen
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4 posted 02-06-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

Beautiful poem, separation is tough hope it works out

 
jascanvey
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5 posted 02-06-2000 12:35 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

This is so lovely DA. They say absence makes the heart grow fonder........
Dark Angel
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6 posted 02-06-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Alias, why thank you   so glad to have touched your heart. Thank you for your sweet reply.
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Elizabeth, thanks and yes she will read it Thank you for your lovely reply, I always do appreciate it!
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Ruth, I will definately share this with her ) thank you for your lovely reply my friend.
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Thank you so much catwoman!!  
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Jascanvey thank you, yes and I do believe it's true.   thank you.

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Denise
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7 posted 02-06-2000 04:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So beautiful and filled with such longing! Wonderful writing, Dark Angel!  

Denise
WhtDove
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8 posted 02-06-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well knock my socks off girl! This was great. So special a poem, you did a fantastic job DA! One of your best I do beleive!

BOO! hehe

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
Dark Angel
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9 posted 02-07-2000 06:51 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hey Angel Girl, thanks honey   BOO back !! hehe

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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