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Alias
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0 posted 02-06-2000 04:17 AM       View Profile for Alias   Email Alias   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alias

Love is everything
and yet it is so small,
i wonder if love
is even love at all?

My head's a swirling cosmos,
of thoughts and wants and gains
but when i think of all the good....
i think of all the pains.

Yet when i make a single call,
i know my love is true-
cos' Bec, you're everything to me
and i know that i love you.



[This message has been edited by Alias (edited 02-10-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Alias - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
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1 posted 02-06-2000 04:21 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

How lovely!  I'm sure she's a lucky girl to have someone like you.     Good job.  Welcome to Passions.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 02-06-2000 05:55 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Welcome Alias
walking the highwire is an easy and enjoyable task when the the net of love is there for us
when it's not ... man O' man that's a long thin line!

Rex}<{{{{o>
Dark Angel
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3 posted 02-06-2000 05:56 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Alias, lovely poem, Bec is a lucky girl!
Welcome to passions!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 02-06-2000).]
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 02-06-2000 08:51 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I do hope you shared this with her...welcome to passions
Poet deVine
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5 posted 02-06-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family. Please check your email for something special!  
catwomen
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6 posted 02-06-2000 12:15 PM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

Welcome
Beautiful poem She is a lucky girl


 
Breathe~
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7 posted 02-06-2000 12:31 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

What a wonderful tribute... )

Very tender...


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
Denise
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8 posted 02-06-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Alias! This is so sweet!

Denise
Katie-Scarlett
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9 posted 02-06-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Katie-Scarlett   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Katie-Scarlett

Words that everyone wants to here...
well done.
binky_bec
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10 posted 02-10-2000 04:02 AM       View Profile for binky_bec   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for binky_bec

LOVE answered.......

why? i hear you ask
that i love you with all my heart?
this question i will answer
though i'm mot sure where to start.

love was an expression
of which i use to criticise
i never knew what it was like
it was vacant in my life.

but then i met that person
and my doubts were born anew
i had finally fallen in love
with that person who is you

your personality is warm
you make me smile and sigh
if only i could tell you
but undoubtingly i try

your voice is my saviour
my unrelenting dream
is to have you to hold
so i can let my feelings free

it upsets me to hear
you ask why that special one is you
i sit and stare for hours
because I know my love for you is true

i don't know how to tell you
in a way you will accept
you've brightened up my life
and for that i am forever in your debt

my love extends beyond description
i can't express the way i feel
frustration often takes it's toll
i'm not sure how i deal

forever i will love you
forever i will yearn
to always have you near
as long as the stars do burn

but i myself have questions
to ask just why it's me
you have chosen to love
what seems unconditionally

i am nothing special
i'm really rather plain
i don't agree with compliments
i am nothing special to gain

forever i will wonder
if that dreaded day
will ever come upon me
the day your heart is taken away

Forever yours
Bec

Alias
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11 posted 02-10-2000 05:59 AM       View Profile for Alias   Email Alias   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alias

Bec you're wrong,
you're everything.
"nothing special" is a lie-
You've made my day,
you've made my life
and now you've made me cry.

My heart is here
for you to hold
A risk I'm game to take-
cos my love is real,
forever...
In your hands my heart is safe.

You're the reason
i wake up every day-
The reason i survive.
But if your love
should ever leave
I'm sure that i would die.

Bec there is no way to say how i feel. the words simply don't exist. Nothing i could ever say would fully express my feelings for you, i love you so much. Bec, you'll always be the most important person in my life.

I'm the luckiest guy alive
when you say that you are mine,
I think i'll use another wish;
won't you be my valentine?

yours forever,
Thomas
XOXOXOX




[This message has been edited by Alias (edited 02-10-2000).]
gypsyqlt
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since 02-08-2000
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Bradford,Vt USA


12 posted 02-10-2000 07:13 AM       View Profile for gypsyqlt   Email gypsyqlt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gypsyqlt

Hi.

Nice poem, only one suggestion; lose the word BUT in the 3rd verse. How about
Yet, when I make a single call ?   I love the rhyme(my forte, even though the critics pan me for it !LOL)  like the little on-line love affair you and Bec have going on...
Jocelyn
Alias
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since 02-06-2000
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13 posted 02-10-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for Alias   Email Alias   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alias

Thanks again everyone for the comments, special thanks to you Jocelyn  
the help was much appreciated...

Bec, everything you do and say is just beautiful.. i really wish that we can be together forever..

I'm just another guy.
A guy who loves you more than anyone else.

Thomas  
anonymousfemale
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since 02-02-2000
Posts 6304
Limbo


14 posted 02-12-2000 04:50 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Very nice Thomas. it's Egg here by the way. It is a very touching poem. Good work.  
~ViXeN~
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since 01-09-2000
Posts 95
Guelph, Ont. Canada


15 posted 02-13-2000 01:08 AM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

awwww this is soo sweet
i think im gonna cry ! hehe
 
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