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Mars
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0 posted 02-06-2000 04:09 AM       View Profile for Mars   Email Mars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mars

In this world of hands
        And the incessant demand
          For touch,
           I stand amazed
             That more of my ilk
                Donít announce
                 This preoccupation
                   In the manner of other
                    Pleasured parts.

                      For there is a coarseness
                        Of desire
                         Enjoyed by and
                          Reserved unto intimates,
                           That quashes
                             The politically correct
                              And travels direct
                               Non-stop to where
                                The hands
                                   With  
                                   The blood-red
                                     Nail polish
                                      Touch me.

Mars

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Astraea
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1 posted 02-06-2000 04:13 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Lovely poem.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


clementine
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2 posted 02-06-2000 04:43 AM       View Profile for clementine   Email clementine   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for clementine

Enjoyed the read.
Patrick B
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3 posted 02-06-2000 07:05 AM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

Interestingly different

 hello darkness my old friend

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 02-06-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

She didn't slap you across the face, did she? Only kidding!
Well presented poem
Liz
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5 posted 02-06-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Hi Mars ~ Neat observational/personal piece. I enjoy your propensity for including sometimes unexpected detail in your writing.

Take care,
Claire
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6 posted 02-06-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh...I like this a lot. Interesting presentation  
Denise
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7 posted 02-06-2000 04:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Touch, I believe, is one of the best ways to communicate love! Beautiful poem!

Denise
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