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catwomen
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0 posted 02-06-2000 02:29 AM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

Lonely

It is lonely with you not here
I long for you to hold me near
You have gone away but I know you will return one day
And hold me in your arms with all your might
And love me all through the coming nights
Never have I been so blue
I am alone and without you.

Loneliness


In my room I sit and cry
Just to think of times gone by
I have loved and lost
I must pay the cost
Of a broken heart
And then again I start
To cry in my loneliness and despair
To think that no one else cares



 

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catwomen
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1 posted 02-06-2000 05:26 PM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

If any one can give me some feed back on these two poems I would appreciated it
jascanvey
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2 posted 02-06-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Cat, two lovely poems. The first so full of hope and the second is just so sad. I hope you are feeling more like the first! ((HUGS))
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3 posted 02-06-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Cat-
I'm sorry that I lost this one
in the shuffle.

I have different views of lonely and alone.

I enjoy my aloneness ...
but when I'm lonely ...
I find that I am the one who needs
to reach out to others to fill me up
and perhaps hold a hand that needs mine.

Don't know if it helps ...
but here's my hand.
I care.
~*Marge*~


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catwomen
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4 posted 02-06-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

Thanks Marge. I also enjoy alone time but long distant relationship do take there toll and some together time right now would be very nice.

 
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Loneliness is very painful. I guess the best thing to do is to keep busy with something.
Both of these poems are very nice!  

Denise
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6 posted 02-07-2000 06:26 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Catwoman these are some lovely thoughts straight from your heart.  I need time to be alone but I do not need to be alone.  I know we all yearn for a special companion, or a friend, or a lover.   Until than loneliness.  James
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