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Jone
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 41


0 posted 2000-02-06 01:44 AM


The times we try
Are ever unending.
The times we don't try,
They need not end.

We live to love,
We love to live.

Love can last a lifetime,
Even if love is not returned.

I love you,
You love him,
He loves her,
Nobody loves each other.

Life hurts,
Love heals.
Love hurts,
Time heals.

Time heals all wounds,
Time does not heal,
Time makes wounds worse,
Deeper,
More painful.

I have loved for time,
Time has not loved me.
I feel for her what she does not for me.

Time is my enemy,
For I have loved for so long,
Time does not even remember.

I love to love so much,
I hate to love so much,
I love to hate to love so much,
So much that I can't help but love.

© Copyright 2000 Jone - All Rights Reserved
Koon
Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43
Singapore
1 posted 2000-02-06 01:57 AM


Nice poem about a love that you can't have. I'm feeling the same way right now....

 Koon-

Alias
Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 30

2 posted 2000-02-06 05:39 AM


Great Poem   Pure Love is very possible, you just have to keep looking for it.... People do love each other.... bad experiences do heal.. keep your head up  
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-02-06 04:12 PM


Very nice and a very thought provoking way to write about an unmutual attraction.  James
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-02-06 05:03 PM


One way love is the most painful love of all.
Nice poem about that!

Denise

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