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*BitterSweet Longing*

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devina
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0 posted 02-05-2000 09:54 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina

Seeing you in my mind,
Feeling your presence on my skin,
Shadows of your smile fading-
Into the very clouds above my head.

Is there no hope-
  No beginning at the end?

For me to need you,
Lies heavily upon my soul-
Such a feeling,
Never felt before.

The light grows very dim,
  On the inside of my heart.

Never will that brightness come again,
Burned out for all eternity…
And deeper as each day passes.




 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-05-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so sad and very beautiful, too. Hang in there! A new light will be shining soon!

Denise
L Tiuch
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2 posted 02-05-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for L Tiuch   Email L Tiuch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for L Tiuch

Such sadness...it is always hard to lose someone, but all things happen for a reason.  I'm sure the light of your life hasn't shined on you yet.
catwomen
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3 posted 02-05-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

Sad but I can relate.
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 02-05-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina-
You've much to say ...
and you say it well.
Smile, pretty girl.
The brightness will come again.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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5 posted 02-06-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

The light shine's brightly for you, you just haven't reached it yet, but when you do it will last forever.  Tracie     keep smiling
Parker
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6 posted 02-06-2000 02:32 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

devina, I feel for you. You are so sweet, you will find happiness again. If I was there I'd give you a big sweet hug, and a wet kiss, to help you forget for a little while.


Parker
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7 posted 02-06-2000 03:25 AM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Oooooh....wow...

Surviving...it's how we go on...

Thank you for sharing... )

hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 02-06-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh, this is so very sad  
HelmutB
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9 posted 02-06-2000 10:08 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

If I would have a light
It would shine on you
If I would have a song
It would be singing it for you

If I would have a man
I would send him to you

I'm sure there is one on his way to your heart already  
How do they say at Loreal
"Because you worth it"



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

devina
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10 posted 02-06-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I want to thank you all for your kind words...maybe the light will shine again!!!

James- you are my knight in shining armor love!!!! Maybe I'll take you up on that one day!!!

Helmut- I'm soo glad you stopped in, I've missed you- good friends are hard to find...I'm glad I found you dear!!! Please keep in touch...my email is always open!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
HelmutB
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11 posted 02-07-2000 08:26 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

I would send you a mail or two if I would know the adress, unfortunatley the mail address is not displayed anymore.
Visit my web site and drop me a line and I shall answer

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

devina
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12 posted 02-07-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Easy as done m'friend!!! (just in case ypur supposta be workin and check this agian!)

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Me2
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13 posted 02-08-2000 01:45 AM       View Profile for Me2   Email Me2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Me2

What can I say .. I know how you feel; and I feel for you and what your going through.  But your poety is the light for so many others; you must know that! It is for me! I love reading 'you'.

My prayers are with you .. and have been every day since we talked last!  

Paul

Corazon
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14 posted 02-08-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

wow good job, and how sad...and yes so many of us can relate....you said it perfect
Danny Holloway
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15 posted 02-08-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Keep that heartlight burning lady!
It will be a beacon for that special person out there who is seeking light to guide him to you.
As always, your writing is so good and with such feeling.
DH
vandana
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16 posted 07-18-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nice Written!!!!!!!
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