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Breathe~
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Early morning rainstorms
dampen sun fires tepid gaze
cloaked in gray the open sky grieves
crying gentle pattern drops
across autumn colored leaves...

I saw you
standing beneath my tree
scarce of shimmering gold and fiery crimsons
branches nearly bare of it's living cloak
lying at rooted feet as winter beckons...

Leaves fall in lazy spirals like carmel rain
"Come back to me" whispers kneel at your feet
carried upon the wings of desolate butterflies
to be crushed beneath your retreating boots
my destruction unseen by carefully blinded eyes...

Breathe~
September 99'
© Copyright 2000 Denise Blackwell - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 02-05-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Breathe~
Your imagery is simply stunning
in this piece.

Welcome to our family of poets and friends.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Breathe~
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Thank you Marge..I'm happy you like... )

It's wonderful to be here...amongst so many talented people...
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with you


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Breathe, Welcome! Great way to start things off! This is beautiful. Hope to see more soon.........   -SEA
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Welcome to Passions, Breathe! This is so beautiful! Great imagery! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
Breathe~
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Sea..

Thank you...thank you... )
Your encouragement is so appreciated...

*smiling..smiling...smiling*

Denise...

Thank you for the card!  I do have to say that this is a very friendly forum...and you all are wonderful...thank you for making me feel welcome...

Denise aka. Breathe~...(seems we share the same name..*grin*)
catwomen
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what a beautiful poem.
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Hurricane Alley


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Well, glad to see you made it! Welcome to the family! Lovely poem to make an entrance with! Please feel free to ask anyone for help if you need it.... we're all here for you...  
Rex Allen McCoy
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Welcome Breathe~
what a sad song you've sung
and it was so well written
I had to smile

Rex}<{{{{o>
Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 02-06-2000 07:56 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Beautiful poem to srart your voyage into passions
Welcome!
Liz
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Catwoman, Rex, and Elizabeth...thank you...I'm glad to be here... )

Poet DeVine...Thank you for finding me... ) This is a real nice place you got here...
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yep, have loved everyone of your poems, really like the way you write  
 
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