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The Last Hello

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 02-05-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

THE LAST HELLO

I remember clearly our first meeting
I offered my hand on introduction
But you were busy, our eyes only briefly met

I do not know when it was, you first noticed me
Perhaps I crawled slowly and deliberately
Under your skin, until you felt me there,
Desiring you, wanting you inside me

Now we are lovers, we share stolen moments,
Still passionate, still exciting, still desiring
of each other's presence

How do we end this - with a handshake and a last hello?
© Copyright 2000 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 02-05-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Roniece, Yes, there are last hellos, but don't stop now, it seems wonderful. You have a very clever title here and I liked the poem, too
Liz
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2 posted 02-05-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Roniece, Wow! This is so moving! I feel like there is more to tell here.........(great poem! )-SEA
hoot_owl_rn
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It hard to say goodbye  
JamesMichael
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4 posted 02-10-2000 08:45 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lovely..lovely...lovely...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 02-11-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Thank you for your comments, I am very much enjoying reading thru all of your work - Passions is definitely the place to be!
'Smiles and laughter make the world go round'

Elizabeth: Thanks for taking the time to read my poem

SEA: Yes there is a little more to tell

Hoot Owl:  Thank you for your comments

James:  Thank you - x
Wizzard
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6 posted 02-12-2000 02:40 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

It sounds to me like something really special that shouldn`t be ended.
Very nice Roniece

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
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