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UNTITLED (my love and his girlfriend)

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just_another_fe
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As i see you standing next to her
I can't help but wonder why?
You keep calling her baby
and a tear drops from my eye.
I wanna be the one that you hold tight.
Tell me again...why cant you be with me tonight?


[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 02-17-2000).]
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devina
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1 posted 02-05-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I can feel your longing in this one...you have created a good image here...but a little hint...your poems will get more response if you put them on one a day!!! Welcome!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
just_another_fe
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thanx for the hint.  
gypsyqlt
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3 posted 02-10-2000 07:07 AM       View Profile for gypsyqlt   Email gypsyqlt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gypsyqlt

Oh Boy.  Personally, i'm touched.  I'm dealing right now with "my husband and the other woman".  Painful stuff, this.
I like this a lot.  Very clear, to the point.  I'd like more of it, though.Jocelyn
just_another_fe
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thank you gypsyqlt. im sorry to hear you have to go through this sitution.  
i wouldnt wish it on anyone. ill try to expand on it and see what i come up with  
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