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Uncertainty

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jascanvey
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0 posted 02-05-2000 05:15 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jascanvey




It's not how I thought it would be,
I don't know if it's you or me,
Things have changed and now I'm scared,
I really thought I was prepared.

It seems I may have lost my friend,
On whom, I'm sure, I came to depend,
I thought so long on making the decision right,
Now I'm uncertain it was worth all the fight.

We seem to have lost all the thought and the care,
I took for granted would always be there,
Now it seems awkward and words go unspoken,
I thought we had something that couldn't be broken.

What are you feeling? What are you thinking?
Is our friendship still true or is it sinking?
Do you care what I think? Do you care what I feel?
There once was a time when I knew this was real.

Is it just me? Am I reading it right?
Tell me why now my phone stays so quiet?
Do you still want me? Do you still need me?
You know where I am, come round and please me.

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 02-05-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I went through this a couple of years ago with my best friend. Sometimes relationships have to change..evolve into something else. Just remain true to the friendship and it will be ok.  
Patrick B
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2 posted 02-05-2000 08:30 PM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

Grimly familiar sentiments,well expressed

 hello darkness my old friend

Denise
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3 posted 02-05-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sadly, some things don't last forever  
Beautiful poem, J.!

Denise
just_another_fe
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4 posted 02-05-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

U WERE RIGHT ME AND U DO HAVE A LOT IN COMMON I CAN TELL JUST BY READING YOUR STUFF. ITS LIKE YOUR TELLING EVERYONE ABOUT MY LIFE.   I LIKE YOUR POAMS THEY ARE VERY GOOD. KEEO UP THE GOOD WORK!
jascanvey
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5 posted 02-06-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Thanks for all your lovely comments. It's nice to be able to share my feelings with someone.
hoot_owl_rn
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This is really quite sad  
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