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I TOLD YOU (losing a friend 4 a love)

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just_another_fe
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0 posted 02-05-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

I told you that I loved him
that much you knew.
You told me that you loved me
and i said " I love you".
It wasn't a lie that was all true
but the way I love him
is different from the way I love you.
You mean the world
but he melts my heart.
It's hard to explain
so I won't even start.
Your afraid that he'll hurt me
so you break my heart.
Your afraid that he'll leave me
so you take a head start.
I told you I loved him
that much you knew.
So i'm asking you this question

Why can't I love him and love you to?
© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 02-06-2000 07:45 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This is a nicely written poem just_another_fe.   James
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 02-06-2000 07:49 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Hmmm, Sounds like the beginning of a triangle. I hope not. I hope #2 loves you back!. Anyway, you say it well. Nicely written
Liz
just_another_fe
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3 posted 02-10-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

Thank you for replying  

Elizabeth:  it's not a love triangle me and #1 were like best friends and he didn't like the guy i chose to be #2. And sometimes i have doubts about #2 loving me back but i honestly think that he does love me.  

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 02-11-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

I like this! .....sometimes best friends end up loving you more than they tell you .....hope it works out with #2    

    Keep smiling .......Roniece......
~ViXeN~
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5 posted 02-13-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

i totally know how you feel! i feel sometimes like im in that predicament every day! wow!
sometimes its hard to let go of a strong bond for love, especially if it hurts someone....
just_another_fe
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6 posted 03-25-2000 04:22 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

ya ur right Vix but i guess if they truely asre your friend they will be your friend no matter who you love. This is an old poe but me and him have made up and are friends again not like before but i guess something is better then nothing
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