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Jone
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 41


0 posted 2000-02-05 04:59 PM


She is beauty,
She is peace.
She is care,
She is love.

My girl is perfect for me,
As am I for her.
We exist as one,
And as one we exist together.

We fit perfectly,
My hand in hers,
She completes me,
And I complete her.

No matter what I need,
She is there to give it to me.
No matter what she needs,
I am there to give it to her.

I love her.
She loves me.

She is smart,
She is wonderful.
She makes me smile,
She makes me laugh.

But, she makes me sad,
She makes me worry.
She makes me wonder why...

The reason for this is simple,
My amazing,
Wonderful,
Peaceful,
Caring,
Kind,
Great girl,

Well, she's not real.
She exists in me and in me alone.
And for that,
I love her.


[This message has been edited by Jone (edited 02-05-2000).]

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-02-05 07:19 PM


I'm sure you will find the real thing someday...lovely thoughts here!  

tulip
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 320
unknown
2 posted 2000-02-05 11:08 PM


I agree,
Sometimes the best things are the things we create...inside our minds!  I hope you can find the real thing!  Good luck!

catwomen
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 49

3 posted 2000-02-05 11:10 PM


you will find the real thing one day. I know I did and it happened when I wasn't looking. Hang in there
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-02-05 11:11 PM


This is beautiful, Jone! I hope your dreams come true!

Denise

~ViXeN~
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada
5 posted 2000-02-05 11:33 PM


Jone - or JoHnathon lol
i liked this one! awesome! keep writing
sher lol

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