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real love isn't there

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Jone
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0 posted 02-05-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for Jone   Email Jone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jone

She is beauty,
She is peace.
She is care,
She is love.

My girl is perfect for me,
As am I for her.
We exist as one,
And as one we exist together.

We fit perfectly,
My hand in hers,
She completes me,
And I complete her.

No matter what I need,
She is there to give it to me.
No matter what she needs,
I am there to give it to her.

I love her.
She loves me.

She is smart,
She is wonderful.
She makes me smile,
She makes me laugh.

But, she makes me sad,
She makes me worry.
She makes me wonder why...

The reason for this is simple,
My amazing,
Wonderful,
Peaceful,
Caring,
Kind,
Great girl,

Well, she's not real.
She exists in me and in me alone.
And for that,
I love her.


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 02-05-2000 07:19 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I'm sure you will find the real thing someday...lovely thoughts here!  
tulip
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2 posted 02-05-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I agree,
Sometimes the best things are the things we create...inside our minds!  I hope you can find the real thing!  Good luck!
catwomen
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3 posted 02-05-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

you will find the real thing one day. I know I did and it happened when I wasn't looking. Hang in there
Denise
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4 posted 02-05-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Jone! I hope your dreams come true!

Denise
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5 posted 02-05-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

Jone - or JoHnathon lol
i liked this one! awesome! keep writing
sher lol
 
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