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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-02-05 04:47 PM


You grabbed my chin
and gently touched my lips.

I gazed into your big brown eyes

It was then that i realized
I love you!

The moment seemed to last forever.
Being held in your arms so tight.

It was like a dream to me.
A dream that now,in your eyes,
never happened.

I still remember the feeling
of your gentle kiss.

I still remember being held
so tight in your arms.

Friends have told me my dreams will fade
and that i'll be better off that way.

If i don't see it
how do they?

How can dreams just fade away.

© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
jascanvey
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
1 posted 2000-02-05 04:51 PM


Ooh yes, I can see we do have a lot in common! The dreams don't fade away, they just become memories that don't hurt so much anymore. This is great! Thanks for sharing.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-02-05 06:16 PM


Welcome to passions family! I noticed that you've posted a lot of your poetry here today and wanted to let you know that it would be better to post only a couple at a time..will make it easier for the members to choose a poem to read and reply to....we also encourage YOU to reply to the poets here...that's how we've built such a wonderful loving community. Again, welcome to Passions!  check your email for a special welcome....    


[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 02-05-2000).]

just_another_fe
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Posts 483
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3 posted 2000-02-10 05:46 PM


julie: lol yes we do  

PD: thanks for the welcome and the advice  

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