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He Loves Her More

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-05-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

He loves her more than Earth and sky
He loves her, and she questions why
He loves her always
With constant, unwavering mind
Though not of the same kind,
Nor made of the same mold;
But to have and to hold
She’s still the one he loves
And loves her only
He sits there thinking of
How he too can feel lonely

He loves her more than any mortal thing
He loves her, more than anything
He loves her always
With undying honor and grace;
No matter what kind of face
Outwardly he might portray,
Nor the words he might not say
He realizes how much love he holds
For her and how it’s so real
When suddenly he cries at the cold
Which she must sometimes feel

He loves her more than time itself
He loves her, equal to himself
He loves her always
With never-ending fire and passion
And when his time is done,
Due to his special stubborn will,
She’ll see, he loves her still

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devina
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1 posted 02-05-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is a great example of every relationship at times!!!! I loved your images!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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2 posted 02-05-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JML-
I liked the way you expressed this.
Most succinct line that says so much:

'He loves her, equal to himself'

WOW !  Hard to measure that much love.
~*Marge*~



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Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 02-05-2000 08:38 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Lucky lady. It must be nice to be loved so much. I hope you tell her often. Very beautiful poem
Liz
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4 posted 02-05-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

For some reason, this really touched me. It likes me much  
d.schultz
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5 posted 02-05-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for d.schultz   Email d.schultz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for d.schultz

JML~~~ My husband read this and said see.. this is exactly what I am trying to tell you... thanks.... he was able to tell me throug your poem.... wonderful poem, now I get it    ds
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6 posted 02-05-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Loving someone as yourself is the best kind of love that there is! This is beautiful, JML! Very nice!

Denise
PoeticKnight
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7 posted 02-07-2000 12:45 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

To everyone: Thanks so much, I am blushing.
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8 posted 02-07-2000 12:48 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I'm going to send this poem RIGHT NOW to my friend. . .I think that she'll finally get it with these words. . .

Thank you JML. . . your words are exactly what I needed. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

PoeticKnight
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9 posted 02-07-2000 01:08 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Wow....i dont have any words to say to that to repay your kindness. Thats sorta why i wrote it at the time, to explain things better than i can say it....
Thanks
Janet Marie
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10 posted 03-14-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

you amaze me..
you move me...
this poem proves everything i said to you.
stalking you with pleasure,
your jm
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