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Rendez-vous

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monique
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since 02-03-2000
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Louisiana


0 posted 02-05-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for monique

I try to write a comment and it did not show
so I will try this to see if it shows


Rendez-vous

To tell  the truth
About this life
On earth so bound
Creation in rage
Laughing
About the end
Near at hand
Grabbing my feet
Touching the ground
With simple words
For simple mind
My tongue is twisting
Love
To make it last
Longer than it should
Afraid to miss
All the fun we had
With you and me
In heat for beast
Created in sin
To be cast out
From heaven the prize
Eternal bliss

Reach my soul
Before it sinks
In the spring
Of his words
Feeding my hunger
For more to come

I bathe my soul
In the lust of your eyes
Searching for peace
Lasting long enough
To satisfy my impatience
Mourning
For death
Come soon
At my rescue
So I won't sin
No more
With your tongue
In my mouth
Reaching for life
Everlasting
Sweet

monique

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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 01-30-2000
Posts 2636
Sippin a Timmy's in London


1 posted 02-06-2000 08:11 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Welcome monique
This is a lovely first post
as always you write with your total
soul
We look forward to more

Rex}<{{{{o>
hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 02-06-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice first post...welcome to passions  
monique
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Posts 377
Louisiana


3 posted 02-06-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

Thank you for the welcome words
I read a few poems and I feel
A loving gentle spirit
In this place

monique
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 02-06-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Monique-
Welcome to Passion's.
Your intuitive feelings are correct.
There are many gentle, loving spirits
that reside in this place.
Glad to have you join us.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


5 posted 02-06-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice monique it sounds like a very interesting meeting.  James
catwomen
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since 02-05-2000
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6 posted 02-06-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

Welcome Monique, beautiful poem
vandana
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7 posted 02-06-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nice poem.Welcome to passions.
RobertB
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since 09-26-1999
Posts 1121
Champaign, IL


8 posted 02-06-2000 07:19 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Monique!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh I am so glad you came over here..... you will love it and feel most welcome.

Robert

 if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.


serenity blaze
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since 02-02-2000
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9 posted 02-06-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Lovely.  Enjoyed your work alot!  Welcome!
monique
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since 02-03-2000
Posts 377
Louisiana


10 posted 02-06-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

Rex, I love your fish symbol.
Robert, well guess who invited me to Passions in Poetry?
And everybody as important as the one I named, you make me feel all warm inside.
I bow to your gentleness toward me.

monique
White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


11 posted 02-07-2000 04:22 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

Lovely poem.  I like it.  I will now echo everyones' heartfelt welcome with no less emotion.  Welcome to Passions.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

Corazon
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12 posted 02-07-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

wow, lovely doesn't encompass this, this is incredible....have been there....great job!!!!!
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