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As It Could Be
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As It Could Be |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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As It Could Be To battle feelings of discontent to see fallacy where reality is meant, to wonder if there is indeed a place to feel again a saving grace… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Come, sweet Soul, to walk the land where still the grass is virgin and no glass, no steel, no one but me and God is all that your eye can see. Come, sweet Soul, to my haven home where Indian and bison once ago roamed where lark and hawk share the sky, come and walk, with God and I. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ To shed despair, and deep depression to reach back to a good life's lesson; to touch an earth that's not been razed, to see again through smoggy haze… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Come, sweet Soul, to walk the land where still the grass is virgin and no glass, no steel, no one but me and God is all that your eye can see. Come, sweet Soul, to my haven home where Indian and bison once ago roamed where lark and hawk share the sky, come and walk, with God and I. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Before I would leave, I would fall upon God's land he gave to us all, to preserve and care for was his desire, but not subject it to human's hateful empires. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Come, sweet Soul, to walk the land where still the grass is virgin and no glass, no steel, no one but me and God is all that your eye can see. Come, sweet Soul, to my haven home where Indian and bison once ago roamed where lark and hawk share the sky, come and walk, with God and I. For though we pray our good intend a glimpse of salvation would our souls to mend. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ©KRJ 5 February, 2000 Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine, this is so beautiful. I'd love to see the land as you described! Great poem!  -SEA |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful! This has a great message and it flowed so effortlessly! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Sunshine! Wonderful heartfelt words!  Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 02-05-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sunshine...this is absolutely beautiful and well written. Sometimes we need reminders like this from time to time |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A land as you set out above Is in my heart A land as you set out above Is in my soul We can pray to have such land again I will join into your prayer So beautiful your poem A land like this I like to roam Sunshine may you shine on every bodies soul The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine- Surely your ~spirit walking~ brings peace and content to your soul. I know it did to mine. The spirits who watch over our Mother Earth are smiling. BEAUTIFUL - JUST BEAUTIFUL 'Come, sweet Soul, to my haven home where Indian and bison once ago roamed where lark and hawk share the sky, come and walk, with God and I.' ~Peace and love~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sunshine, this is more than beautiful. I love it |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All of your responses more than fill my heart. Thanks to each and every one of you who took refuge in this little piece. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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