»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #5
»
Within a Needle's Eye
| Open Poetry #5 |
|
Within a Needle's Eye |
|
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
|
Within a Needle's Eye Of all the stars of Milkey Way Of all the planets in the sky And all the universe beyond Visible within God's eye In all of space, in all of time We're here within a needle's eye Then why is it so difficult To get together , you and I? Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-05-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved | |||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well put, Elizabeth... I find myself wondering the same. Sometimes people wait for something to happen that will never happen with mere wishing... Without sincere desire and great effort on both parts, you only get a lot of "might have beens." |
||
|
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful, Elizabeth, and something I can identify with as well. Thank you! Claire |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Liz, you make a great point! Wow, I sure liked this. Gave me some neat thoughts to ponder awhile.  -SEA |
||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You tell that man to get with it Liz...  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
||
|
Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
anything worth being requires sacrifice... you can quote me on that one... (remind me I said it every once in a while )Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran |
||
|
Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
I really find this beautiful. It says so much in so few words. It reminds me of the movie, 2010. Remember when they look into the monolith and see billions of stars? It's the entire universe of a new creation. That's what I see here in this poem. ~Gene |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, When I was a child they said because why was a crooked letter. And now that I am grown I can't think of anything better. Love Sy |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Suthern, You are right, it is a two way street. Thanks Claire, Thank you SEA, Think on! And thanks for commenting devina, OK, I will Rebel, If it is worth being, it will be Gene, Right, and we are in the needles eye. Thanks Sy, Well then, curse them crooked letters! Thanks for the little poem Love ya, Liz |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend- I sure like this. And Sy ... you heard her, 'Well then, curse them crooked letters!' Liz, you are a treasure. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, Yeh, thanks for backing me up on that important point. We sure told him, didn't we! I'm glad you liked the poem, dear poet Liz |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Good question, Elizabeth! Of course, I don't have the answer!  Denise |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
That's a tough one Liz...but sometimes things are simply beyond our control  |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
