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Yuh Just What I Wanted (not my usual fair)

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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)


0 posted 02-05-2000 03:18 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

This not my usual fair
Why this time I had a date
For all my pals at passions
To this might hesitate

The Turtles performing live
I could not pass up a chance
To meet my online girly girl
With whom I shared romance

Oh yuh Texas has one of
The tallest Ferris wheels
I thought I'd get a kiss up there
But she might think I was a heel

Going on the merry go round
I reached out for the brass ring
Seems though in just short time
A gold one instead would bring


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serenity blaze
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since 02-02-2000
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1 posted 02-05-2000 03:37 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

"So Happy To-geth-er..."  Or should that be,
"So Happy To-get-her?"   Either way, you are still good fun...  I did enjoy, and am smiling as I type!
WhtDove
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2 posted 02-05-2000 08:50 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well, didn't you get lucky then eh? hehe...wouldn't find me on a ferris wheel though...phew

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
Denise
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3 posted 02-05-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Gold is so much nicer than brass, Walt! This is sweet!

Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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This is sweet walt  
catwomen
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5 posted 02-06-2000 01:57 AM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

very sweet.
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