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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-02-05 03:18 AM


This not my usual fair
Why this time I had a date
For all my pals at passions
To this might hesitate

The Turtles performing live
I could not pass up a chance
To meet my online girly girl
With whom I shared romance

Oh yuh Texas has one of
The tallest Ferris wheels
I thought I'd get a kiss up there
But she might think I was a heel

Going on the merry go round
I reached out for the brass ring
Seems though in just short time
A gold one instead would bring


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-05-2000).]

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-02-05 03:37 AM


"So Happy To-geth-er..."  Or should that be,
"So Happy To-get-her?"   Either way, you are still good fun...  I did enjoy, and am smiling as I type!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-02-05 08:50 AM


Well, didn't you get lucky then eh? hehe...wouldn't find me on a ferris wheel though...phew

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-02-05 09:05 PM


Gold is so much nicer than brass, Walt! This is sweet!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-02-05 09:46 PM


This is sweet walt  
catwomen
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 49

5 posted 2000-02-06 01:57 AM


very sweet.
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