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The Conductor (Me first attempt at free verse that i enjoyed writing. be nice or else)

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wayoutwalt
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Shaking one arm off to the east
Shaking one arm off to the west
The conductor of sounds begins
Never ending remarks of beauty
Not noted by the gentle beings will
To please or to cause harmful tones
There is beauty in all the world
The conductor of sounds bears it all
Reacting to the beauty is man's fate
Who sifted the great beyondness
Not the gentle being the harmless
The one who is blamed wreaks havoc
Through the players in the symphony
All well mastered in their trade
Guided by his wand


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-05-2000).]
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1 posted 02-05-2000 02:58 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Excellent! I like this Walt.  
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Well Done!  Especially liked " reacting to the beauty is man's fate..."  How very apropro!
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BRAVO
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Walt, take a bow, this is really good!   -SEA
wayoutwalt
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thanks you guys for the confidence and special thanx to poet devine for sayin yuh post it its good  
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Walt you've done a great job! Be nice or what eh? haha...j/k

Well done for your first shot at it.

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uhhhhh.....would it be ok to say I like it a lot ? In fact I love it !  
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Me thinks free verse likes you well m'friend!!!

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There is beauty in all the world, we just have to have the eyes to see it and the ears to hear it! Beautiful symphony, Walt!  

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WOW to "WOW"...Great job!!!
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