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Perfect true love

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Jone
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0 posted 02-05-2000 01:29 AM       View Profile for Jone   Email Jone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jone

The chaos in my mind,
Like a tornado in the ocean,
It makes me, makes me go blind.

I cannot see the future,
The past,
The present,
I cannot see the world,
For the world cannot see me.

Hurt, pain, misery, happiness.
Love.

Love is hurt.
Love is pain.
Love is misery.
Is love happiness?

My world has turned,
I have never found love,
Maybe love has burned.

Love is death,
Death brings out love.
It takes away my breath;
To think that love is life,
To think there is a perfect love,
To think that one can find true love,
It takes away my breath,
It scares me half to death.

Maybe it's time,
Time will tell.

Maybe one day all will be known,
Maybe one day every will be shown.

Today we do not know,
But maybe we will tomorrow,

Yes, tomorrow we will know,
There is no true love in this world,
For any one of us to show.
© Copyright 2000 Jone - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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1 posted 02-05-2000 02:24 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

"I cannot see the world,
For the world cannot see me."

Slam! Nailed that one on the head!
Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 02-05-2000 02:31 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

welcome Jone ... I have felt your pain
and I agree that love is all the things that you have described
and more
it's the 'and more' part that won't surface
and show its' face for quite some time
possibly not til a new love blossoms
Have faith

Rex


[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 02-05-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 02-05-2000 02:52 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Jone-
Hmmmm !
Nice entrance you've made to
Passion's.  Welcome.

Love can be found
true or not ...
in the love you're in,
in the love you've got.

True love comes
when your guard is down.
Treat it kindly ...
it'll stick around.

Love it for
the time you're in it ...
for it can flee
in just a minute.

If it goes
as it often does
another will come
just becuz .....
that's just the way
it is with love.
~*Marge*~




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serenity blaze
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4 posted 02-05-2000 02:55 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Welcome the forum, Jone.  I look forward to reading more.
Astraea
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5 posted 02-05-2000 03:17 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Welcome, welcome, welcome!  Nice poem!  Lovely way to make an entrance.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Poet deVine
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6 posted 02-05-2000 07:29 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Check your email for a special welcome....  
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 02-05-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Jone, Welcome to Passions, and with this heartfelt poem. All you describe is real until you find a true love
Liz
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8 posted 02-05-2000 09:03 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WELCOME!  Looking for love in all the wrong places...there is true love out there!
God for one will never let you down.  

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
Jone
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9 posted 02-05-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for Jone   Email Jone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jone

Thank you all for your time in reading my poem....
in reading all of the poems throughout this forum, however, i have noticed that they are mostly sad and unhappy poems about pain and misery.... should true love cause pain and misery?
SEA
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with you


10 posted 02-05-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Jone, yes love does cause pain and misery, should it? No, of course not. I think- good with the bad- day with night and so on. Your poem was really heartfelt.Welcome! I will definately be looking for more from you!   -SEA
JamesMichael
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11 posted 02-05-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Well Jone it looks like love has really disappointed you or have you disappointed love.  I have lots of hope for the beauty of love and yes at times it can be painful....James
Gemini
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12 posted 02-05-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

A very beautiful and sad poem, you hit all the emotions right on!
catwomen
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13 posted 02-06-2000 02:13 AM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

Your poem is beautiful. and yes love does bring pain and misery, yet at the same time it can bring great joy and happiness.

Love finds you when you least expect it I know

 
 
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