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serenity blaze
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0 posted 02-05-2000 12:47 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

I want cool breezes
     and fingertips
         tracing circles
of goosebumps on my back in mindless repetition.
     Warm soft lips,
         baptizing me
             like summer rain dropping
on a sweaty, wondrous, child,
     eyes shut tight,
         arms spread wide,
dancing in circles dizzy with life.

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Denise
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That sounds good to me too! Lovely, lighthearted piece!

Denise
Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 02-05-2000 02:55 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

you are an amazing writer serenity
you style almost gives me de ja vu
it's like i've seen it before
eons ago

Rex
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serenity blaze
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3 posted 02-05-2000 03:53 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Rex Allen, Rex Allen, now you have made serenity blush...thanx to you and "d" for the moral support.
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4 posted 02-05-2000 07:24 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Now THIS conjures up images
of sensuality personified.
Great piece of writing here.
~*Marge*~



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WhtDove
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5 posted 02-05-2000 09:05 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Wow! The simple life of childhood. Well done!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
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Absolutely wonderfully written. This one likes me much  
latearrival
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Our needs haven't changed much have they? love it.latearrival
Klassy Lassy
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8 posted 05-19-2009 02:33 AM       View Profile for Klassy Lassy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Klassy Lassy

Such joyful regeneration!  

Thank you.  I feel your heart throwing stars into the universe...
 
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