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A Vulcan Love Poem -- (covering 2 challenges in 1)

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Gene
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2-in-1

I Think this meets the requirements for both Poet deVine's Valentine challenge and Marilyn's Humor challenge.

"A Vulcan Love Poem"


If I had it within me, to show emotion,
My circulatory organ would be full of human-like feelings for you.
For, I do appreciate you.
Your mind is an incredible object to meld with.
It is most illuminating and logical.
I find your appearance extremely satisfying in a most cerebral way.
Your ears, so perfectly acute,
Your eyebrows, so uplifting,
Your hair, each strand, so logically placed,
And you spread your fingers with such accuracy and grace,
Always an exact 46.1372mm between fingertips.
I do need you in a most physical and intellectual way,
And require your partnership.
Therefore, if you will be my biological necessary companion,
Together, we shall live long and prosper.

_____

~Gene~






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Poet deVine
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I believe you have satisfied both requirements! LOL
Denise
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This is hillarious, Gene! Very well done and both challenges met in fine order!

Denise
Elizabeth Santos
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And intellectually challenging, as well! Well done
Liz
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ROFL...very clever  
JG3 RolmiesterFW TO GRS
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Hey nice Poem Euge!!
My Sqd likes it too they were laughing about it too!
Rol...
Gene
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PdV, Thanks, but I've got more.

Denise, and Hoot, Thanks, glad you both liked it.

Liz, That was very nice of you to say. Actually, it was the easiest thing I ever wrote. I just imagined myself as Mr. Spock.  

Rol, Nice to see you here. (Rol is a freind I've known for 5 years). Hope your buddies got a good chuckle. Hey, did you ever think about a smaller user name?  

~Gene  
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