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A Friend In Time

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Dark Angel
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A Friend In Time

Tides of passion
Admired by the
Moon and the sun
Divide our devotion
Causing to run wild
Our emotions

Trust, faith and  
Patience,
An emotional Anchor
Pulling us down
To slowly drown…
But, our love is strong
Our love soaked hearts
Together, they do belong.

Knotting our love
Closely, intertwined
Joining our souls
Together in Rhyme
Lasting throughout
Dimensions,
Facets and time!

Dark Angel


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Ah..the ultimate..to have someone by your side through eternity...very good DA!  
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Excellent writing, angel!
Chris Goodman
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I really like your poem.

Chris Goodman
Denise
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Very lovely, Dark Angel!   There's nothing better in life than that!

Denise
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DA this most excellent! You blow me away!  

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
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Good poem...friends are the essence of our beings.
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oooh...made me feel witchy...I LIKE feeling witchy!  Thanks!
Elizabeth Santos
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Very well written. I enjoyed this one
Good work
Liz
Dark Angel
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Thank you all so very much for taking the time to read this and for your kind replies. I aprreciate them very much.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Dark Angel-
This is as fine a piece as I've seen.
Your pieces just keep getting better.
Great muses you must have.
~*Marge*~


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