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robot in a self-made human trap

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 02-04-2000 06:17 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

In my own way I struggle to find the right words
it's not that I don't feel just that I can't speak
when what you feel seems right or is it that it's wrong
a simple touch a hand can be the needed tweak

So tweak me if you can I need what I can't find
laughter or a smile I know it's there somewhere
that closed off space between my heart and mind
walking talking robot or human in need of repair

Who else has been where the sun can't get through
where the clouds surround and are always beside you
you seek and look for help from deep within yourself
and smile when you laugh cause you never left a clue

As I look at what I've written I wonder where I am
maybe I just lost my course and need to find a map
I'm better off with silence it stops a flooding dam
but here I am the robot in a self-made human trap..

I'd better add that this is just something my fingers typed but perhaps they came from a robot?..Who can be sure ?




 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..





[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 02-04-2000).]
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Martie
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1 posted 02-04-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I know I have felt similar, and only can say, not for long and it passed. At least you were able to write, that should be a little self tweak right there.  Hugs!
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2 posted 02-04-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

RG, Instead of a tweak, how about a hand to hold?   -SEA
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3 posted 02-04-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Martie: Yep, I'm not sure where this came from, perhaps a robotic hand but I agree, the sun will always shine, well it better cause otherwise I can't be around..

HUGS

Sea: Sweetheart, that was lovely and more often than not, a hand that holds can say so much...I'll be honest I am a bit miserable tonight but my laughter is still infectious so something works..

HUGS

 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

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4 posted 02-04-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

If I could reach across the miles
I'd tickle you till I found smiles.
Unfortunately, we're not near
But you must know I think you're dear!
Hang on, sweet lady, for I send
My hugs and love to you, my friend!
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With a heart as big as yours, you could not be a robot...but I do understand what you're saying..sometimes we just do..we don't think....
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6 posted 02-04-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Suthern:

Across the miles came all these smiles
from a lady called Motherhen and friend
Moon aghast as rainbow crossed the miles
and as she tickled a giggle sounded loud
infectious laughter brightening the sky
shooting stars fired off a rainbow cloud

HUSG


 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

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7 posted 02-04-2000 07:46 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thanks Sharon, I get mad with myself when I get miserable cause I should know better...LOL

HUSG

 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

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