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I kicked the devil's but last night!

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Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


0 posted 02-04-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

I hope that y'll like my vision on this poem.

Last night,
the devil and I,
had a great fight.
We went head-to-head, for twelve rounds
and in the end, he was the one on the ground.
We were fighting for control,
of my body and soul.
I had to show the devil,
that I was above his level.
Because now, I'm on God's side
and I'll be there, till I die.
God has shown me,
the wonderful fruits of life,
when you're good.
And I accepted it because,
I wanted to and I understood.
I admit at times, I feel tempted,
to join my former sinful life
because, I feel exempted.
But I know that,
it's just the devil trying to get me
because, that's his job and like God,
his presence rings eternally.
But when another battle arises,
I'll be ready to fight
because, I kicked his but last night!

 Nathan
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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


1 posted 02-04-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nate this is really entertaining and I'm glad that you won...of course you got God on your side...James
Denise
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2 posted 02-04-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I'll just bet you did, too, Nate!! Wonderful poem!!

Denise
Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


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Thank you Jmee and Denise for the comments.

 Nathan
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