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Like A Breeze Blowing Backwards
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Like A Breeze Blowing Backwards |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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Like a breeze blowing backwards through this life of mine I journeyed back last night to a special place and time. ~ Like a breeze blowing backwards I heard you call my name The sound went to my ears yet touched my heart the same. ~ Like a breeze blowing backwards through my memory I saw your face-I felt your hands reaching out for me. ~ Like a breeze blowing backwards the songs danced on air whimsical and feather light my soul I did bare. ~ Like a breeze blowing backwards Time's Ocean has been part so that I may wonder through the memories in my heart. -SEA- |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
SEA, I like the title of this poem and the writing. We all journey back sometimes, because some memories never fade. Very well written! DH |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Danny, I thank you kindly!  -SEA |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Another wonderful poem from you Sea. I do enjoy your postings, they stir up so much emotions for me. I then feel I have to retire to write some of my own! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sea, this is really well done! Great title and good thoughts! |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Like A SEA Breeze...  This is really beautifully written. I enjoyed it, SEA. ~Gene |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jascanvey.....I am flattered that I can stir emotions in you! Balladeer.....Your praise makes me blush, thank you!  Gene,I'm glad you liked it! -SEA- |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
sea: beautiful work i experience the same thing far too often these days... thank you for expressing it so well sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Poetry Kills, I didn't really expect any one to like this one, I'm so glad you did! -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow! Excellent poem! Wonderful memories.<*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beautiful...simply beautiful... |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Whtdove, thank you very much!  Serenity, yay! Glad you liked! -SEA-  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA- I really like this. Wonderful thoughts. Made me feel warm and fuzzy !  Wherever the wind blows ... there I am. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, soft and comforting feel! Very lovely! Denise |
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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca |
To go back in time, hmmm, I think everyone wishes it at some point or another.... wonderfully said sea. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very well written poem and a wonderful title! Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Love the title |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, glad you liked - warm fuzzies are cool! Denise, thanks, glad you liked! Red, thank you! Liz, I'm glad you liked this! Hoot, thanks! -SEA- |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
SEA, this has a very pleasant, peaceful, harmonious feeling to it. Great title choice, too. Claire |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
SEA--Sure have been there, great poem....I really like the "breeze blowing backwards" thoughts...... |
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