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SEA
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Like a breeze blowing backwards
through this life of mine
I journeyed back last night
to a special place and time.

            ~
Like a breeze blowing backwards
I heard you call my name
The sound went to my ears
yet touched my heart the same.

            ~
Like a breeze blowing backwards
through my memory
I saw your face-I felt your hands
reaching out for me.

            ~
Like a breeze blowing backwards
the songs danced on air
whimsical and feather light
my soul I did bare.

            ~
Like a breeze blowing backwards
Time's Ocean has been part
so that I may wonder through
the memories in my heart.
-SEA-
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SEA, I like the title of this poem and the writing.  We all journey back sometimes, because some memories never fade.
Very well written!
DH
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Danny, I thank you kindly!   -SEA
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Another wonderful poem from you Sea. I do enjoy your postings, they stir up so much emotions for me. I then feel I have to retire to write some of my own!
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Sea, this is really well done! Great title and good thoughts!
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Like A SEA Breeze...    
This is really beautifully written. I enjoyed it, SEA.

~Gene
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Jascanvey.....I am flattered that I can stir emotions in you!  

Balladeer.....Your praise makes me blush, thank you!

Gene,I'm glad you liked it!  
-SEA-
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sea: beautiful work    i experience the same thing far too often these days... thank you for expressing it so well  

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain
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Poetry Kills, I didn't really expect any one to like this one, I'm so glad you did!   -SEA
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Wow! Excellent poem!   Wonderful memories.

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
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Beautiful...simply beautiful...
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Whtdove, thank you very much!  

Serenity, yay! Glad you liked!  
-SEA-


                    
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SEA-
I really like this.
Wonderful thoughts.
Made me feel warm and fuzzy !
  

Wherever the wind blows ...
there I am.
~*Marge*~


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Yep, soft and comforting feel! Very lovely!
Denise
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To go back in time, hmmm, I think everyone wishes it at some point or another.... wonderfully said sea.
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Very well written poem and a wonderful title!
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Love the title  
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Marge, glad you liked - warm fuzzies are cool!

Denise, thanks, glad you liked!  

Red, thank you!  

Liz, I'm glad you liked this!

Hoot, thanks!
-SEA-
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SEA, this has a very pleasant, peaceful, harmonious feeling to it. Great title choice, too.

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SEA--Sure have been there, great poem....I really like the "breeze blowing backwards" thoughts......
 
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