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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 02-04-2000 07:47 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

This  Is  Love
~ Marge Tindal~

The greatest love of all,
The sweetest words I hear.
The sound of little -I Love You's-
Tenderly falling on my ear.

Heart filled to overflowing,
Head with thoughts so clear.
Healthy hearts together,
Having a time so dear.

Is this what they call love?
It must be what they talk about.
In the still of the night,
In the moment of a shout.

Sweet breaths of sighs unending.
Songs sung into the night.
Softly hummed caresses,
So reassuring, so right.

I've only just begun
I've only started the test.
I've already convinced myself.
I have got the best.

Sing with me if you're happy.
Stay close to my side.
Stand just close enough
So we are filled with pride.

Love me when you will.
Like me after that.
Lasting thoughts of you
Laughing at the drop of a hat.

Of quiet moments
On memories etched
Only the time is not long enough,
One more day is stretched.

Vivid color of your eyes.
Vast depth to be seen.
Victoriously claiming the prize
Very dear to me.

Easy the memories come
Easier in the making.
Easily stored away,
Especially when awakening.




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com         



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-04-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 02-04-2000 08:23 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Being anacrostically impaired (not even sure I can spell it right), I envy those who can do these things.
Seriously, enjoyed your poem very much.  Well done.
Toerag
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2 posted 02-04-2000 08:35 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

W ow!
O nly you could
W rite something like this!
Meadowmuse
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3 posted 02-04-2000 09:00 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Marge, this is wonderful...sweet and endearing. (and Ditto what Mike and Toe said!)


Claire
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4 posted 02-04-2000 09:50 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is wonderful, Marge!! Well done!
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5 posted 02-04-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

There seems to be no limit to your talents, Marge! This is absolutely wonderful!!

Danny Holloway
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6 posted 02-04-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Those stored away memories of children are some of the best we have and the ones we most often bring out and polish.
Very creative!
DH
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7 posted 02-04-2000 12:04 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Very well written Marge, as always, you have warmed my heart this morn!!!(devina raises her coffee cup in a toast!!)

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Rex Allen McCoy
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If your girl gets cold ... don't you leave her
cause chills are always followed by fever
Is this love?

just kidding
excellent poem Marge
Rex
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Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 02-04-2000 01:19 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Very clever acrostic, and a wonderful loving verse
This is just lovely
Liz
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10 posted 02-04-2000 01:58 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Marge, this is not only a beautiful, loving verse, it's also a great acrostic !  
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Love the presentation of this one
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 02-05-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mike-
Thank you bunches.
They are fun to do.

Toe-
Gosh, you make me feel special.
Thank you.

Claire-
I appreciate your comments,
my talented friend.

Suthern-
Thank you, lady.

Denise-
Gosh, I sure appreciate that.

Danny-
Thank you for your interpretation and
your comments.

Devina-
I'd LOVE to have a cup of coffee with you !
Thanks, gal.

Rex-
Okay.
Thanks for the poem.

Elizabeth, my friend-
Thank you, Ms. Liz.
Just my heart talking again.

Munda-
It's such a pleasure for me to
see you comment on what I've written.

Hoot-
Thanks, Ruth.
I always appreciate your comments.

~*Marge*~


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noles1@totcon.com


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