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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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This Is Love ~ Marge Tindal~ The greatest love of all, The sweetest words I hear. The sound of little -I Love You's- Tenderly falling on my ear. Heart filled to overflowing, Head with thoughts so clear. Healthy hearts together, Having a time so dear. Is this what they call love? It must be what they talk about. In the still of the night, In the moment of a shout. Sweet breaths of sighs unending. Songs sung into the night. Softly hummed caresses, So reassuring, so right. I've only just begun I've only started the test. I've already convinced myself. I have got the best. Sing with me if you're happy. Stay close to my side. Stand just close enough So we are filled with pride. Love me when you will. Like me after that. Lasting thoughts of you Laughing at the drop of a hat. Of quiet moments On memories etched Only the time is not long enough, One more day is stretched. Vivid color of your eyes. Vast depth to be seen. Victoriously claiming the prize Very dear to me. Easy the memories come Easier in the making. Easily stored away, Especially when awakening. < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-04-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Being anacrostically impaired (not even sure I can spell it right), I envy those who can do these things. Seriously, enjoyed your poem very much. Well done. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
W ow! O nly you could W rite something like this! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, this is wonderful...sweet and endearing. (and Ditto what Mike and Toe said!) Claire |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is wonderful, Marge!! Well done! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There seems to be no limit to your talents, Marge! This is absolutely wonderful!! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Those stored away memories of children are some of the best we have and the ones we most often bring out and polish. Very creative! DH |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very well written Marge, as always, you have warmed my heart this morn!!!(devina raises her coffee cup in a toast!!) Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
If your girl gets cold ... don't you leave her cause chills are always followed by fever Is this love?  just kidding excellent poem Marge Rex }<{{{{o> |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very clever acrostic, and a wonderful loving verse This is just lovely Liz |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Marge, this is not only a beautiful, loving verse, it's also a great acrostic !  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Love the presentation of this one |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike- Thank you bunches. They are fun to do. Toe- Gosh, you make me feel special. Thank you. Claire- I appreciate your comments, my talented friend. Suthern- Thank you, lady. Denise- Gosh, I sure appreciate that. Danny- Thank you for your interpretation and your comments. Devina- I'd LOVE to have a cup of coffee with you ! Thanks, gal. Rex- Okay. Thanks for the poem.  Elizabeth, my friend- Thank you, Ms. Liz. Just my heart talking again. Munda- It's such a pleasure for me to see you comment on what I've written. Hoot- Thanks, Ruth. I always appreciate your comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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