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The Jackal
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0 posted 02-03-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

suck in the hate
suck in the pain
suck everything that you crave
suck up your superficial underlying fear
suck up that feeling
suck up that reason
suck it up entirely
till it gives you some reason for living..


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1 posted 02-04-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Hm...ok..well...not sure I know what you were aiming for here...
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I could be wrong, but I think it was trying to say that when you reach something that you just can't repress anymore, then that's your reason for living?  That something that you just can't "suck in"?  But nevertheless, it makes me think what you really meant.  Nice.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


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