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Cupid's Pearled Wing (In response to the Valentine Challenge)

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


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A softly blooming ballad,
Touched by golden dew,
The sunrise of our destiny,
Graced with rosy hue.

A rhapsody of heartbeat,
Floating upon my skin,
With the flutter of eternity,
True love does begin.

The whisper of our eyes,
Hinting of the fire,
The locking of our gaze,
Releases soft desire.

Upon cupid's pearled wing,
My dreams begin to fly,
And with you here with me,
I can touch the endless sky.

The sorrow of my spirit,
Is slowly swept away,
As with you, my valentine,
My soul so gently sways.


 *Krista Knutson*

One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
~*Antonio Porchia*~
© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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Awwwwwww ! Krista-
If I found this in a card shop ...
I'd buy it.
~*Marge*~


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Awwwwww....   wonderful love poem!  I'm sure Jeffy boy will love this!  Ready for Valentine's day?  Hehe, I finally can get bon-bons...  

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons

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Sweet and romantic, Krista!

Denise
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The whisper of our eyes,
Hinting of the fire,
The locking of our gaze,
Releases soft desire.

My favorite passage in this wonderful poem  

Jenny Lee
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A wonderful, romantic, beautiful poem Krista !
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Thank you all!  

 *Krista Knutson*

One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
~*Antonio Porchia*~
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Absolutely beautiful...take Marge up on her offer and submit this to a card company so she will have to buy it
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Krista... you do beautiful work.  I'm so happy for you.  You have a wonderful skill that will take you far, and isn't being wasted.  I'm proud to call you my bestist friend in the whole wide world.  
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Krista
What a beautiful poem for Valentines Day.
Excellent verses and rhyme. Very enjoyable reading.
You're Good! In fact, you're better than good!
Liz
 
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