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I'm not ready to say good-bye
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I'm not ready to say good-bye |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Please touch me like you did before let me feel your magic just once more Don't turn away- there's still so much I need to say Don't leave me don't go now to live without you I don't know how I don't want for you to die I'm not ready to say good-bye. -SEA- |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sadly touching SEA....and well done! Denise |
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Lynn Wood New Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 8Manchester, N.H. |
Very, VERY touching indeed. Such a feeling deserves poetry and poetry deserves it. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Denise and Lynn.....Thank you  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA- A touch of tears beautifully cried. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I loved this, SEA. I remember reading somewhere once that poetry is the thoughts we use to fill -- and, I'll add, enrich -- our silence. This shows that beautifully. Mike |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This makes me want to cry....sooo real!! I bet everyone can relate to this at least once in their lives!! Hearfelt and sad!! Take Care Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice feelings of Love and hurting right from your heart. James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very beautiful SEA...keep faith, your poem showed stength as well as sadness!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
heartfelt and piercing. Wonderfully written Rich |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very tender and heart warming liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So very sad  Have you ever noticed That the words... "Goodbye" "I'm sorry" "I love you" Are so easy to pronounce ...Yet so hard to say ~Javan |
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WendyLynne New Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 6 |
SEA, I don't think any of us are ever ready to say goodbye. You've captured a universal sentiment here - and one that is very real for me right now. Thanks for sharing. WendyLynne |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge,Bsquirrel,Justbleu,James,Devina,Spiked,Liz,Hoot, and Wendy........Thank you all for your kind responses!  -SEA |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
another lovely poem, Sea! The worst is when when never get a chance to say goodbye and closure never really comes. I imagine that this poem was a tough one to write and I admire the fact that you did write it and shared it with us. Corinne |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
A heartbreaking poem Sea. So simple, so sad, so true. Thanks for sharing. |
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d.schultz Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 43 |
Wonderful poem Sea I am in the process of having to say goodbye .... very hard to do.. ds |
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