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I thought diamonds were forever...

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RainbowGirl
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Whispering softly to the moon
asking quietly why lover's wings
get broken all too soon
in losing closeness comes back in

How can we share this together
the promises yet we broke the chain
and in our hearts feel so alone
still we laugh and share the pain

Pictures of castles made of sand
in dreams we lived together
how long is love supposed to shine
I thought diamonds were forever...




 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

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Denise
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1 posted 02-03-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sad yet beautiful, Rainbow Girl! Quite lovely!  

Denise
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2 posted 02-03-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

This one is a gem ... it sparkles with loving feelings.
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~



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3 posted 02-04-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is one of your best (if I had to choose)...simply lovely...flowing...I really like it!  
JamesMichael
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4 posted 02-04-2000 05:05 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Really nice Rainbow.  I think that diamonds are forever...but if we pick the wrong diamond it takes off on us. (laugh)  James
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Denise: Thanks you..
Marge:  I hope that comes across..
PDV:    Thanks Sharon I appreciate that..
Jamie:  I guess so..

HUGS

 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

Munda
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6 posted 02-04-2000 02:04 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Ahh, but diamonds are forever, they just don't shine bright every minute of the day, but you should see them when they catch the light of a Rainbow.  
Great poem Cindy.
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7 posted 02-05-2000 03:48 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

RG, maybe not diamonds, but definately Rubies! Rubies are forever, at least for me! I love reading your poetry! -SEA
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RG,
Your speaking of diamonds in the rough of course? Enjoyed the poem. *L*
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I have to agree with PdV....one of the finest!

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I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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10 posted 02-05-2000 07:28 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

If I would have a diamond
I would give it to you
Not as a lover but as a friend to you
Hugs and Love will some day die with me
But the diamond will forever be with thee
So If I had a diamond
I would give it to you
For your a friend of mine that I love too
But a diamond could never be
as beautiful as thee

Beautiful Poerty


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  



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