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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-02-02 05:51 PM


I've seen the world through the condor's eyes,
Such beauty to behold,
The memories of soaring in the blue,
Will stay with me until I'm old.

I've swum the deepest oceans,
Amidst the dolphins and whales,
Oh the stories I could tell,
Such joyous ocean tales.

I've roamed with the wild wolf's pack,
My place destined in their society,
Sharing in their mournful cry,
That yearning was a part of me.

I rode the fabled Pegasis,
Through the stormy sky,
He shared with me life's mysteries,
He too is not ashamed to cry.

I spoke with the Unicorn King,
His wisdom he did bestow,
He's right.  All of life is magical,
If you don't live it, you'll never know.

I sat with the Loon Bird,
He cried mournfully all the while,
Looking for his lost love,
Without her, never again could he smile.

All these animals have wisdom,
Much more so than our own,
Perhaps if we follow their example,
The world could be our home.




 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Bronx
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since 2000-01-28
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Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
1 posted 2000-02-02 05:58 PM


WONDERFUL!-
I loved this poem!  This is sooo cool.  I love the idea.  I would have never thought of such a great idea!  You are very gifted in the poetry department!
Poetically yours
Bronx

Isis
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2 posted 2000-02-02 06:02 PM


Thanks Bronx!!  Something different I was thinking of, but not sure how it would go over.  Obviously ok if your response is proof. Thanks hon  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-02 06:20 PM


Isis, this is GREAT!!!!!!
so creative and imaginative, fun to read...
very nice work
take care,janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Isis
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4 posted 2000-02-02 06:24 PM


Thanks Janet Marie  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
5 posted 2000-02-02 10:55 PM


I really enjoyed this Isis!
Your imagination knows no boundries...I'd love to see more from you using the nature and fantasy theme
Well done!!!!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon






Isis
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6 posted 2000-02-02 11:51 PM


Thanks Pepper (HUGS)  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
7 posted 2000-02-03 12:36 PM


OK- You have my stamp saying that this

ROCKS!!!


Wonderful expression! Love the creativity!!!  

summer
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa
8 posted 2000-02-03 12:43 PM


yes isis.....this was beautiful i saw you with all these brilliant animals, learning of life...you are a wonderfull poet...
Isis
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9 posted 2000-02-03 12:44 PM


Thanks Christopher that means a lot from you  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Isis
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Sunny Queensland
10 posted 2000-02-03 12:49 PM


Thanks Summer!!  Wonderful poet not I, that is what I want to be!!  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Denise
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11 posted 2000-02-03 09:48 AM


I too enjoyed the nature theme! Very creative, Isis!

Denise

~Venus~
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12 posted 2000-02-03 05:01 PM


This was so good, Isis. And I'm soo sorry about breaking the rules of posting my stuff.   But I won't do it again!

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
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13 posted 2000-02-03 05:02 PM


  Great idea! I think about unicorns and pegases (however you spell it) all the time but never thought about writing about one of them...better yet both!

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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