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After The Game" -- (Marilyn's challenge)

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Gene
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"After the Game"
(Peanuts, Hotdogs and Beer)

Tonight, in bed, I lie awake,
Thinking ‘bout all I ate.

Three bags of peanuts, six hot dogs,
And what seemed like a gallon of beer.

My stomach is churning ‘round and ‘round
My head is splitting ear to ear--
From all the peanuts, hotdogs and torrid beer.

If ever I go to another ball game,
Pray, I don’t hear that horrid yell,
"PEANUTS, HOTDOGS, BEER HERE."
For, I think I’d rather be in Hell.


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~Gene

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Funny one, Gene! Now did you learn your lesson?! In the future just drink a half gallon!  

Denise
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~Gene-
LOL !  
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LOL
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LOL--What fun you must have had.
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Learn my lesson?  I could go for a nice cold one right now.  

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Marilyn, You wanted something that would move your stomach. Well, I think this covers it--from both laughing and sour stomach.  

~Gene  

[This message has been edited by u_gene (edited 02-03-2000).]
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LOL. Well I never feel sorry for self inflicted agony...BUT...since you told it so well and with great humour, I will have pity.   Can I get you an auntacid?  
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Make it at ROOTbeer next time and you'll feel better! Good one!  
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ROTFLMDO.... hehe....
You better yet, u-gene???
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It's that Torrid Beer...(Tastes Arsenate/More Swilling!)

This was a cute one, Gene!  


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Just leave off the hot dogs and peanuts! *EG*
 
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