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Can't stand to be apart

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vandana
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0 posted 02-03-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


I thought you would hold me,
Every minute,every second,
If I ever needed you,
you seems you're holding,
Every breath of a every second,
You couldn't let yourself ,
get closer to me,
all the things
I never used to say,
Right now,
Is the time for us,
To know,
hpw much life can easier,
Sometimes,
we don't know,
what we've been doing?
We get confused and
screamed aloud,
It's brought me back i
n your direction,
even though we've been apart,
you're part of my soul,
Iwant you to know
love can hold every minute
If we ever say goodbye,
we can look back at our life,
We are being foolish of evry minute
before you go,
I want to know that
I think of you everyday,
And I can't seem to get away,
from these feelings,
Ineed to tell you,
somehoe It's better for us
to be together,
I need to be your side,
every minute of my life,
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1 posted 02-03-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

It's very hard to be apart from the one we love.    I hope all your dreams come true, Vandana!  

Denise
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This is excellent Vandana, I know how hard it is to be away from someone you love   hang in there
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