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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 2000-02-03 06:28 PM


Insomnia


A robber
of numerous night's sleep
locks the door
of my room
and forces
anxious thoughts
on a nervous mind until
there is no more night
and the morning holds
no release
for a traumatized
psyche.


Robert


 if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.



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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-02-03 07:03 PM


Great poem Robert! That describes it very well!

Denise

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
2 posted 2000-02-03 07:23 PM


I've met this thief and he's a real bastard. Well written RB.
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-02-03 07:29 PM


Robert.. I've met him as well and agree he is a bastard..Tracie    Great Poem
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-02-03 07:43 PM


Been there for sure  
RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
5 posted 2000-02-03 08:54 PM


I KNEW you guys would know all about this dude!!!  I have good company at night eh??
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
6 posted 2000-02-04 01:12 AM


You have a problem sleeping? I have a problem staying awake!
You're up anyway so give my problem some thought...and your problem... well
I'll have to sleep on it

Liked it Robert but sorry I can't relate
to the problem ... never been there

Rex
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