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Blondie
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0 posted 02-03-2000 06:13 PM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Blondie

* I finally got my lap top

You make me feel miserable
You make me feel sad
And when I am suffering
I just know you are glad.
You`ve pushed away my friends
With the things you make me do
And the only thing I`m left with
Is the false comfort of you.
You make me feel guilty
You insist I`m too fat.
You force me to exercise
No matter how long I`ve sat.
I try to just listen
And do what you say
But will you ever leave?
I wait for the day.


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with you


1 posted 02-03-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Blondie, I'm so sorry for you. I hope you feel better. I can't even imagine what you are going through. -SEA
RobertB
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2 posted 02-03-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

This is "just" a poem right?? I mean this can't happen in "real" life. right??

all too often it does.....


Robert
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3 posted 02-03-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice poem Blondie.  I see your eyes are wide open.  James
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I hope you feel better soon...keep the poetry flowing...keep your mind open... let your friends help you through this.  
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My prayers are with you Blondie. I wish you the best.

Denise
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6 posted 02-04-2000 12:13 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

She's there surviving it all
For you see, she has a good heart
One of the best, I'd say
And with a spirit keeping her heart wishing
Nothing will keep her down
We all wish you the best
Me, as well.
For we all go through hard times together
And we will always support the rest.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


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