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Heaven's Fall

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PoeticKnight
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Morning will come, that much is proven true
Though the night is endless when all alone
For time itself never shall misconstrue
That which Heaven can no longer condone
If it falls amongst love and mortal men
A happier place this would surely be
Of love immortal and love without end
And my love becoming a boundless sea

These things speak of what may come to pass
Yet existed beside me all the while
For in your arms, a Heaven that will last
And a reason to be within your smile
Fully my heart will be on such display
Now I know that Heaven is on the way

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
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"Earth has no sorrow that heaven can't heal" ~Thomas Moore

nice poem  
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2 posted 02-03-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely poem, JML!  

Denise
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3 posted 02-04-2000 09:18 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Thanks you ladies very much. This was one of my few new ones, and I hope to get back on track one day.
Meadowmuse
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I think your track is back!  

This reads very well, and I enjoyed the uplifting spirit in which it was written.


Claire
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I hope it is Claire, this is one of only 2 maybe new ones among the ones I am posting.
I think I need to quit my job and just write...oops, I got bills *S*.
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