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Someday you will feel the same way

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conman
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0 posted 02-03-2000 05:16 PM       View Profile for conman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for conman

Tonya Kay, wow
what can I say
just thinking of you
instantly brightens my day

When I am with you
everything seems so right
I can't imagine a better place to be
than here with you tonight

You are so beautiful
yet you don't even know it
I never told you before
because I was so scared to show it

You are so perfect in every way
This I wish you could see
Someday I hope you will understand
just how much you mean to me

You smile is so beautiful
like a rainbow after the storm
I wish I could see you more often
You fill my heart with warmth

You eyes are like stars
always shining so bright
When they look into mine
I now know why I am here with you tonight

When I go to bed at night
My mind is on you
I lay there wondering
Are you thinking of me too?

You are so great in so many ways
It is impossible to express in words
That is why when I am with you
my heart is as free as a bird

I have never had feelings before
like the ones I have for you
Hopefully someday
you will feel the same way too
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1 posted 02-03-2000 05:33 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Conman, such sweet,tender,loving feelings here! Great poem! Welcome!   -SEA
Gene
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2 posted 02-03-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Welcome, Conman. A wonderful poem and a great way start.  

~Gene
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3 posted 02-03-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions,Conman! This is such a beautiful love poem! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
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4 posted 02-03-2000 07:50 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions  
conman
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5 posted 02-03-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for conman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for conman

Everyone,thank you for making me feel so welcome.  It makes me feel great.  This is how I truly feel about a girl right at this moment.  I am going to take her out on Valentines day and give her a rose and read it to her.  I hope that she likes it.  

 
Justbleu
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6 posted 02-04-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I bet she'll love it!!  I can sooo relate to this!!  Lovely poem Conman!!

Welcome to Passions!!!!!!

Bridgette


 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."
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7 posted 02-04-2000 01:43 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Very sweet. You managed to take the observational cliches of first love and turn them into something original. That's hard to do. Welcome.

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8 posted 02-04-2000 02:19 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is wonderful , So sweet I hope she returns the same feelings   Welcome to passions
JamesMichael
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9 posted 02-04-2000 05:10 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Romantic and nice.  Made me think about that old Elvis song "Love Me Tender"    James
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