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Distant Memory

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0 posted 02-03-2000 04:34 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

Distant Memory

Iíve found the memories of our past
Are not enough to make it last
I need much more in life you see
A love that also needs me.

Iíve twisted and turned each night gone by
Looking for answers of when and why
Iíve seen the way you look in my eyes
Those sparks of the past have long since died.

The burning sense I feel inside
Confuses what I have given
To look into your eyes again
Is why I am still living

Yet based on what you have shown me
Our time together has past
Canít change the things you see in me
Need more to make it last.

Progression in a moment
The compromise of two
To share a love together
Not much more I can do

Open up your will
Allow your mind to roam
Keeping thoughts of what we could be
From this state of the unknown.

© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-03-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Spiked, this flowed beautifully! Wonderful. -SEA
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2 posted 02-03-2000 04:45 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

thanks sea.
not satisfied with it but it will do as my head is so cluttered with thoughts they aren't coming as clear as usual
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3 posted 02-03-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Poignantly sad...captures beautifully the helplessness of that strange non-communicating place that relationships tend to drift into...like poetry, sometimes they just need to be re-worked.  I have faith in you, tho.
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Sad   But there's always hope if the spirit is willing! (of course, both have to be willing)

Denise
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5 posted 02-04-2000 11:48 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Sometimes we just have to move on and let things fall as they do.
Can't make someone Love you. it needs to be mutual or it just doesn't work.

Thanks
Rich
 
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