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Miss Abagail Mannering
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byron, il


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Look into my eyes
and you'll see my fear
of loosing the handsome man
that i hold so dear.

Look into my heart
and you shall see
how very much I care;
and what your love means to me.

Look into my soul
and I'm sure you'll find
the depths of my feelings-
and how i speak my mind.

Look into my love
and no doubt you'll know
that my stuborness sometimes
inhibits my 'confident' show.

Look into my life
and you'll definately see
the path has been rocky,
and the climb far from easy.

Look into yourself
and find what you need...
and from now on don't give the vulchers
something on which to feed.

*written 2-2-2000, for my beau, Richard.. we are nearing our 5th month together...and we are having a little trouble with self esteem/selfworth..that is why i wrote it.*


"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

[This message has been edited by Miss Abagail Mannering (edited 02-03-2000).]
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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 02-03-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I liked this, Miss Abagail!!  
Miss Abagail Mannering
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2 posted 02-03-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

Thanks... i wrote it during one of my boring classes last night.
:

 "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me
JamesMichael
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3 posted 02-03-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice Miss Abagail the way you can so clearly see your situation and write your feelings about it.    James
Miss Abagail Mannering
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4 posted 02-04-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

thank you, James...
I love Rick SO much..i just wish i could give him the self confidene he's lacking.


 "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me
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