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Once Upon A Dream
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0 posted 2000-02-03 02:20 PM


Love's touch brushes over me
Like a whisper in the night
Pale moon light shines down
And it surrounds my heart
And it blankets my soul
And it lays my mind to rest

Your touch lightly dances on me
Like a summer morning breeze
Filling my body with warmth
And it surrounds my heart
And it blankets my soul
And it lays my mind to rest

Emptied of emptiness
Deprived of all loneliness
Invigorated by this song
Your touch..and Love's
Are one and the same


 God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I can not change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.

~~~OnceUponADream~~~

© Copyright 2000 Once Upon A Dream - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-02-03 03:07 PM


Once, Incredibly romantic!-SEA
conman
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2 posted 2000-02-03 05:02 PM


Great poem to give to someone on Valentines Day.  I feel that way about a girl.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-02-03 07:26 PM


"And it surrounds my heart
And it blankets my soul
And it lays my mind to rest"
Very nice lines  
By the way, I like your signon  

Denise
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4 posted 2000-02-03 08:19 PM


This is so beautiful, Once! Sweet love poem!!
Denise

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