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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-03 10:40 AM


I’ve been having thoughts lately that
I need to feel your saving grace
And once more look upon that holy place
You say we’ve been there before
And you know the emotions I’m feeling
As you take me in hands of healing
Loneliness can be such a reward
For misery suffered one too many times
Oh how your love can be such a crime
Allow me this one brief rest
From the hell in which I dwell
Weave about me the darkest magic spell
Reach out to me, I’ll fall into you
Offer me arms unfolded again
Like the night to the day, I will give in


© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-03 10:45 AM


This is beautiful, JML! Wonderful!

Denise

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2000-02-03 11:02 AM


The number you have dialed is still in sevice
( so far so good )
All our lines are currently busy ... can you
please hold ?
This shouldn't happen here ... These lines are always open and these people really care
Heartbreaking thoughts
well written

Rex
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Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
3 posted 2000-02-03 11:04 AM


Ah, love lost and found.  Very nice work, JML.  I look forward to seeing more.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-02-03 11:22 AM


Beautiful  
Rosalind Palafox
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5 posted 2000-02-03 11:23 AM


And so i melt to the floor and you fall unto me......*sigh* nice poem!  

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
6 posted 2000-02-03 01:18 PM


Beautiful poem, indeed.

 Nathan

SEA
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7 posted 2000-02-03 01:21 PM


JML, this is lovely!   -SEA
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