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Fall Into You

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-03-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Iíve been having thoughts lately that
I need to feel your saving grace
And once more look upon that holy place
You say weíve been there before
And you know the emotions Iím feeling
As you take me in hands of healing
Loneliness can be such a reward
For misery suffered one too many times
Oh how your love can be such a crime
Allow me this one brief rest
From the hell in which I dwell
Weave about me the darkest magic spell
Reach out to me, Iíll fall into you
Offer me arms unfolded again
Like the night to the day, I will give in

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-03-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, JML! Wonderful!

Denise
Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 02-03-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

The number you have dialed is still in sevice
( so far so good )
All our lines are currently busy ... can you
please hold ?
This shouldn't happen here ... These lines are always open and these people really care
Heartbreaking thoughts
well written

Rex
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Sally S.
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3 posted 02-03-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Ah, love lost and found.  Very nice work, JML.  I look forward to seeing more.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 02-03-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful  
Rosalind Palafox
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5 posted 02-03-2000 11:23 AM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

And so i melt to the floor and you fall unto me......*sigh* nice poem!  

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
Nate Dogg
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6 posted 02-03-2000 01:18 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Beautiful poem, indeed.

 Nathan
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with you


7 posted 02-03-2000 01:21 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

JML, this is lovely!   -SEA
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