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Nicole
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0 posted 02-03-2000 02:34 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

We together
In stasis – our world
Thoughts intermittent sent
Heard by you
I hear

Nascent
Yearning – a love to be born
Our love
Ubiquitous, so great as to witness
Raven’s tears in fear of such joy
Amassed from naught but
Relishing the gifted
Melody of your
Smile

I caught within
A
Maelstrom of brilliant hues
From midnight pools of deep blue -shades of green-
Imbued with spirit’s light, shining stars
N’er thought to break free
Assuage this fire
Lit by your gaze

Loved as I by
You

Fancy me, Love – the
Reality of you
Eternally
Entrapped in the freedom – of you



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
© Copyright 2000 Nicole Adams - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


1 posted 02-03-2000 02:41 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Let me be the first to say how INCREDIBLE this poem is!!!

It's INCREDIBLE!!!

Loved:
"Amassed from naught but
Relishing the gifted
Melody of your
Smile"


I loved it all, but that, is what poetry is about!

[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 02-03-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 02-03-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

WOW !
What an awesome acrostic.
What an awesome poem.
WHAT AN AWESOME, AWESOME PAIR !

The subtly of this is truly amazing.
I think this may be one of the best
of yours I've seen to date.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 02-03-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

WONDERFUL!!!! This is absolutely one of your best poems I've yet to see. I love it

"Within your arms I am finally free" great line for an acrostic
Denise
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4 posted 02-03-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

'Entrapped in the freedom - of you'

That just about sums up the perfect love relationship!

Well done and beautiful!

Denise
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5 posted 02-04-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Acrostically speaking this is great writing.. even without the acrostics, it's a wonderfully written poem. I congratulate you! I am looking forward to having you as a Mentor in the Teen Mentor Program!
JennyLee
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6 posted 02-04-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

In Your Arms I Am Finally Free...
Nothing better than that Satiate!

Excellent form and writing  

Jenny Lee


[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 02-04-2000).]
Nicole
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7 posted 02-04-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Chris - wow...geeze, guy.   Thanks so much!

Marge & Ruth - Thank you both, very much!  Such great compliments coming from two poets I greatly admire leaves me blushing and quite honored!  

Denise - Thank you!  

PdV - Thank you too!!  I very much look forward to being involved in the Mentor program!  

Jenny Lee - You're such a sweetie, thanks so much!  


 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
Munda
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8 posted 02-04-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Satiate, this is icredible good. Love it..."within your arms I am finally free"...great line !  
Martie
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9 posted 02-04-2000 06:47 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Wonderful poem, much enjoyed.
 
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