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As This Night Fell

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Justbleu
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0 posted 02-03-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Such bright in the dimmness
Amongst the brown and green
Running blue flows wild nearby
Friendly shadows in a trance
All is warm and free
In such delicate harmony
Perfection in a dream
Soft carresses, an easy touch
Sparks a flame of desire
One swaying in the wind
Closeness as one with all
Life in full circle, delicate
Songs of flesh echoeing
In the moment of time
All worlds combine together
Catching all in hypnotic dance
Joy, love, and peace unite
A picture of truth
All in a mystery



 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."


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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


1 posted 02-03-2000 01:39 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

And a hypnotic poem!!!
Beautiful!
hoot_owl_rn
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I like this  
Denise
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3 posted 02-03-2000 10:19 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful! I was carried along effortless from the first word through to the last!  

Denise
Sally S.
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4 posted 02-03-2000 10:23 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

A poem that makes you feel good from start to finish!  Nice work, justbleu!  
Meadowmuse
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5 posted 02-03-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"Such bright in the dimmness
Amongst the brown and green
Running blue flows wild nearby"

So fresh, your words and style.  I liked this very much!

Claire
Justbleu
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6 posted 02-03-2000 11:46 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Christopher....hypnotic poem...hmm!! Thank You!!  

Glad you liked it Hoot!! Thanks!!  

Denise that's cool that you seemed to flow through it so...Thank You!!  

Thanks Sally...it was meant to make one feel good!!  

Wow...a freshness to it...kinda pure huh?? Thank You Meadowmuse!!  
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