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Naturally-denise

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Lynn Wood
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since 01-30-2000
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Manchester, N.H.


0 posted 02-02-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for Lynn Wood   Email Lynn Wood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn Wood

I looked out upon the cold, cold snow,
Taking up in my hand from down below,
A glorious handful of that frozen dew.
Within that hand I wondered of you.

What I saw in that hand was a single flake,
Complex in form I could only make.
Each single branch repeated six times,
As though to be completing it's predestined rhymes.

This flake of mine,
It's beauty devine,
Guaranteed by nature it's singularity,
Altogether I'm awed by it's glistening rarity.

Suddenly it strikes me,
A feeling that fails to let be.
That this totally awesome, wondrous snowflake of  
     dew.
Cannot begin to be as beautiful as you!

© Copyright 2000 Lynwood Bryan - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-02-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, this is beautiful! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise (hey, that's my name too!)
Pepper
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since 08-19-99
Posts 3134
Southern Florida

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2 posted 02-03-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Welcome to Passions Lynn  
Your poem is lovely...thank you for sharing.....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon





hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 02-03-2000 10:17 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lovely, welcome to passions  

 Have you ever noticed
That the words...
"Goodbye"
"I'm sorry"
"I love you"
Are so easy to pronounce
...Yet so hard to say
~Javan
Paul Hoekman
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since 12-28-1999
Posts 385
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>


4 posted 02-03-2000 01:14 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Intricately beautiful
WELCOME!
We are glad to have you with us.
Paul
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 01-30-2000
Posts 2636
Sippin a Timmy's in London


5 posted 02-03-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

If I sent you my picture ... you might
consider changing the last line  
Liked it ... welcome

Rex
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SEA
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with you


6 posted 02-03-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Lynn, this is so sweet! Welcome! - SEA
Gene
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since 01-23-2000
Posts 940
Colorado, USA


7 posted 02-03-2000 06:56 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Lynn, Welcome to the forums. Beautiful entrance.  

~Gene
Lynn Wood
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since 01-30-2000
Posts 8
Manchester, N.H.


8 posted 02-03-2000 08:58 PM       View Profile for Lynn Wood   Email Lynn Wood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn Wood

I'm flabberghasted, at a loss for words.  Thanks to all of you! By the way-thanks to MY Denise.  
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


9 posted 02-04-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you.  
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
Posts 3430
Oregon, Originally From Alaska


10 posted 02-04-2000 01:08 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Wow!!  What a wonderful piece!!  I just recently moved from Alaska!!  I do soo miss the snow and my friends who are all in their own unique ways beautiful!!

Welcome to Passions!!!!  

Bridgette


 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."
whiskey
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Australia


11 posted 02-04-2000 01:49 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is excellent very beautiful , Welcome to passions  
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
Posts 4587
Victoria, Australia


12 posted 02-06-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Lyn What a beautiful poem..Welcome to passions, hope you enjoy this haven as much as I do. Tracie      
catwomen
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since 02-05-2000
Posts 49


13 posted 02-06-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for catwomen   Email catwomen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catwomen

Beutiful poem. Welcome to passions
Breathe~
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since 02-05-2000
Posts 319
Washington...


14 posted 02-06-2000 12:08 AM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Wow...I was hoping that was to me...*smiling*

Simply lovely...

Breathe~..(another Denise)
 
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