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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
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Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-02-02 11:32 PM


I challenge you both young and old,
To join me here in jest.
We've had a lot of problems and
We really need a rest.

I tried with Balladeer's Bible Babes,
But few did take the bait.
I'm really quite beside myself,
HELP ME!! I'm in a state.

I ask you all to join us,
In a humour war.
Matters not the target,
Just make my stomach sore.




[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 02-03-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2000-02-03 02:03 AM


Want a commical poem?
Hey!
Not a problem
One with a sore stomach?
ok ...break out the Pepto Bismol

Rex
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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 2000-02-03 02:05 AM


Marilyn, I hate to be the pain in the butt...well ok, I love to be the pain in the butt, but could you please fix your title???

Challenge.
Not Challange!!!!




And I'll try!

Nan
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3 posted 2000-02-03 07:58 AM


Well now - I see "Challenge" not "Challange"...

Marilyn - don't be paying any heed to Christopher - He's very trying....

RainbowGirl
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4 posted 2000-02-03 08:04 AM


ROFL @ Chris...or did Marilyn sneak in and change it???..*g*

Lead me to humour, it will make my day..

HUGS

 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..


Poet deVine
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5 posted 2000-02-03 08:50 AM


I shall post nothing but humorous poetry til Sunday...hmmmm.....let me search my archives....    
SEA
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with you
6 posted 2000-02-03 09:17 AM


Marilyn, can I make fun of Santa Claus?!
-SEA-

Marilyn
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7 posted 2000-02-03 05:14 PM


Rex..thaks for the poem..  

Chris..Revange (note the spelling error!!) is sweet my friend.   Can't wait for your poem to be posted....lol

Nan....I never pay much attention to Chris...*shrug*....lol

Rainbow...I tiptoed past Chris and changed it while he wasn't lookin. It was late last night when I posted this and I was just typing...not paying attention to the end result...*sigh*. Never type half asleep with Chris around...lmao

Sharon...Great! I will be looking ofrward to it.  

Sea...You can make fun of anyone you wish. Although you might not get much for christmas this year. I think he would be a safe bet because...well he wouldn't strike back!! Unlike Balladeer or Toe or Andrew or Sailor or...and the list goes on!!


[This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 02-03-2000).]

Isis
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8 posted 2000-02-03 05:49 PM


I'm in.  Now who does what???

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Gene
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since 2000-01-23
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Colorado, USA
9 posted 2000-02-03 06:52 PM


O.K. I'll see what I can come up with. It's gonna be kinda short, though.

~Gene  

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2000-02-03 07:11 PM


Marilyn-

The 'jester' is IN !

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Marilyn
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11 posted 2000-02-03 08:07 PM


Denise...*waving arms wildly*...over here!!

You guys are great!! Keep 'em coming!  

Denise
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12 posted 2000-02-03 08:08 PM


Thanks Marilyn!!  

Denise

First__Knight
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13 posted 2000-02-06 12:10 PM


Oh your bad Marilyn

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL



Mars
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 10

14 posted 2000-02-06 12:16 PM


STAN

There once was a poet named Stan,
Whose verses were so hard to scan,
When told this was so he replied, "Yes I know,
But I always like to put as many words in the last line as I can."

Author Unknown

Gemini
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15 posted 2000-02-06 09:12 PM


Please read the "Sleepwalking" poem I wrote, as I also needed a pick me up in my life so happened to remember an episode with my son, which prompted me to write it.
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