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Red
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0 posted 02-02-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for Red   Email Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Red


LOVE ME

Wether or not tommorow,
still holds promises of things to be,
does not seem quite so important anymore,
for I've opened my eyes and now I can see.

Tommorow doesn't really matter,
and yesterday is part of the past.
Today is all that we really have,
it is the only moment that ever lasts.

And I am through planning my life,
on a path that I've never touched.
I'm ready to embrace my life now,
I finally realize that I am worth that much.

So if you want to love me, love me now,
before the chance is no longer ours.
We've already wasted so much time,
so many lonely comfortless hours.

My mind is overflowing with thoughts of you,
my love is yours for the taking.
But I fear that with each passing day,
My heart is in jeopardy of breaking.

So please listen to my plea,
if you think that you can find a way,
Forget about yesterday, don't think of tommorow,
I'm here right now, love me today..
© Copyright 2000 Melissa - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 02-02-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

this was very lovely. Can't wait to hear more from you

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Lynn Wood
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2 posted 02-02-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for Lynn Wood   Email Lynn Wood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn Wood

Red, you said it so well. I connected quite easily.
Denise
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3 posted 02-02-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree! Now is all we really have. Well stated!

Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 02-03-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh...so very true  
RainbowGirl
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5 posted 02-03-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Red: Wow!...Can I relate to this..

Kudos

HUGS

 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

Danny Holloway
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6 posted 02-03-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

"Today is all that we really have".  
This is so true.  Well written poem.
DH
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7 posted 02-03-2000 11:27 AM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

"YEah! Take me NOw!notice me!!" of course, these things always happen. why are they so blind?

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


8 posted 02-05-2000 01:33 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Carpe Diem!
For what have we to live for, but for moments which shall turn to memories?
Bravo!

 "Life is a noun, and living no more or less a matter of adding adjectives."
Carnivores of Light and Darkness
-Alan Dean Foster
Corinne
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9 posted 02-05-2000 02:30 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Red,

I like the message in this poem a lot!

While reading it, I saw a few things that I would like to suggest, if I may be so bold and if you are open to them, email me at cmbailey@jps.net.

Corinne
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10 posted 02-05-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Red, I can relate very well to this. This is just fantastic!-SEA
Nate Dogg
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11 posted 02-05-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Brilliant poem, Red. You on-point too!

 Nathan
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 02-05-2000 05:00 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Red,
An open invitation, good idea. Enjoyed the poem.
Gemini
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13 posted 02-05-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Whew, I could not have said it better.  If it were true of the one I think of every day, I'd probably be over there in a heartbeat! Excellent poem.
jascanvey
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14 posted 02-05-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Lovely poem, Red, it's all so true, but we never think of it at the time do we?!
Poet deVine
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15 posted 02-05-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

A simple title..a simple request..a good poem...  
Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 02-05-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You've read my heart, and spoken it so well
Excellent poem
Liz
Red
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17 posted 02-08-2000 12:08 AM       View Profile for Red   Email Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Red

Thank you all so much, and Corinne... I'm always open to suggestions, constructive criticism is always a good thing, you can feel free to email me also at melh79@hotmail.com...... thank you all again.
 
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